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Post by gliriel on May 18, 2009 3:58:38 GMT -5
Fantastic!
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Post by toughgirl on May 20, 2009 2:07:54 GMT -5
chapter 8
That afternoon they managed to get out of Athens without being seen. When out of Athens bounderies Malka sighed deeply, Artiside came up behind her with his nose in the air still filled with pride, and Meg looked behind her to see her sidekicks. "Will you two hurry up? We're losing daylight." Meg groaned, flipping her hair as more leaves from the bushes rained down. Malka panted, "I never ran any races or anything like that!" Malka said giving Meg an angry look, obviously tired of her attitude. "Well join the club!" Meg spat, Artiside's eyes widened and he lowered his head. "Oh yeah? Well you sure act like you have, wealthy, spoiled, perfect, taken care of, ungratful PRINCESS!" Malka snarled, unaware that see had given Meg the worst possible insult anyone had ever said to her face. Meg eyes blazed and were glazed with rage, "Wanna repeat that you kvetching, weeping, helpless, loner?", Artiside flopped down hoping they'd be in a better mood since they had gotten food. "Take that back, ROYAL GIRL!" Malka demanded. Ussually Meg would have began to fight right there and then, but Meg just shrugged and leaned against a tree, "no point in fighting you, I doubt you even know where I am!" Malka jumped at her mean remark, and answered cooly, " I know where you are.". Meg laughed loudly, "YOU DO NOT, you dont know whats two feet in front of you!". Malka gulped and repeated, "I know where you are!", this time Meg looked at her and her mind filled with thoughts of the castle, being taken advantage of, being judged for what she couldn't do and worst of all hurting herself trying to prove that she could do anything. The slaves gave her angry looks, as if blaming her for her father's deed, he sibblings all gave her a look of discust, but worst of all her father's look......of disapointment, disapointed with everything she did, disapointed that she couldnt do just what he wanted, thinking Meg was a mistake. Meg's eyes flickered as Malka shouted to her, "I cant prove that I can sense where everything is! I'LL PROVE IT!", "oh Malka, Malka, Malka I know you know where everything is yy-your perfectly capable of that!" Meg stammered. Malka noded, "I'll show ya how capable I am!". Malka began to walk again, faster and faster, she past Meg and Artiside. "Ya see? I can sense everyth-----" she was cut off by a splash, Malka had fallen into the stream! Meg and Artiside glanced at eachother, Artiside was determined to laugh, but Meg she was hit with the powerful blow of sadness again, she WOULD help Malka, Malka would be able to see, she will see the world with all her senses, even if its the last thing Meg does.
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Post by toughgirl on May 22, 2009 5:46:04 GMT -5
Chapter 9
Artiside looked to Meg, with big green eyes as if to tell her "SNAP OUTA IT!" Meg started to walk again without a word. Malka immediatly followed after hearing the sound of footsteps, she didnt speak to Meg. Meg was deep in thought, what could she do to help Malka, hmmm. "YES! I've got it!" she walked faster and faster until she was facing a tree, but quick- footed Meg dodged the tree hoping Malka would do the same. Malka clearly sensed it there, but when she tried to dodge around it, THUD! Malka had been brought down by a root, which seemed to be laughing at her, surely roots enjoy throwing people to the ground. Meg cringed but still kept the act, "what just tripped ya, Malky?". Malka coughed, got up, and brushed dirt off her dress, "either that tree root or your foot." Artiside was in front of Meg, rolling on the ground laughing at the epic fall. "put two and two together Malk---" Malka interupted crossing her arms, "four, we need to keep going, we already wasted enough time!" Meg walked up to Artiside, who is still laughing, and nudged him with her foot, "Comeon ya blond---" she was cut off again by the sound of Artiside squeal. Since they were on hilly terrian they werent on flat ground. So, Artiside had rollen down the side of the hill and into a bush, his head soon poked out of the bush and he hacked up some leaves. Meg covered her faced with her hands and shook her head, this was not off to a great start.
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Post by gliriel on May 26, 2009 6:10:23 GMT -5
I really like your writing. It's very interesting. Keep going!
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Post by toughgirl on May 28, 2009 4:15:23 GMT -5
Chapter 10
Each day, Meg watched Malka closly and studied her every move. Malka did trip of on several things (surely not as much as Meg), but she seemed to cope well. Meg ussually would have recorded this information on something, but what to write on. It had been 5 days before Meg descided to take mental notes, "Day five, and Malka is STILL holding a grudge against me, we are traveling together for some odd reason, so shes just kinda making it harder for the both of us". Malka kicked a small pebble and smiled as she heard the sound of it fall to the ground. Meg looked at the sight and smirked and took another mental note, "blind people achieve paculiar things". Artiside chased the pebble as Malka kicked it, and Meg rolled her ankle watching with S0ME interest. Malka laughed as if she could see Artiside right now, snarling playfully at the pebbles. Meg finnally spoke, "will you children hurry up?". Malka blushed and muttered, "you saw that?". Meg noded slowly and started to walk when Malka fell onto her side, AGAIN. Meg groaned and turned to her, she repeated once again "you okay, Malky?". Malka answered with "I'M FINE!"and she scrambled to her feet, "Just fine...". Meg turned away from Malka not knowing what to say or when to say it, Meg thought, "I'm a big mess up anyways, no one needs to prove that to me...that one person who always reminds me how screwed up I am is... myself, I dare not forget it".
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chroniclesofsparta
Hero
I keep following on the right note whenever i hear your voice:]
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Aug 4, 2009 20:41:15 GMT -5
no its not a dumb idea!!!  )) |
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chroniclesofsparta
Hero
I keep following on the right note whenever i hear your voice:]
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Aug 4, 2009 20:49:12 GMT -5
LOL for the first time,Meg did a successful walking!  |
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Post by toughgirl on Sept 2, 2009 10:48:44 GMT -5
i no right? lol
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Post by uheduja on Jul 22, 2019 4:28:59 GMT -5
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