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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Jun 21, 2009 5:47:20 GMT -5
yah.. im taking theoutbound's place so if you puckers are against it, well boohoo! also ive my 3rd place fanfictions please read! ty! ^^ _____________________________________________________ It was a hot summer day in Thebes, Meg and Herc we're already settled in to their vacation house near the waterfalls, but as the fun was about to begin, Meg received a letter from her long lost parents Dear Megara,we have received a caution that you have come. We need your presence, Your mother is very ill and i'm almost at my end. If i die no one will look after her, But you. We didnt really mean to sell you to the rich King Midas. We didnt expect that he'll throw you away too. Forgive us and go home with us, I heard you're with Hurcules? or is it Hercules? that doesnt really matter, doesnt it?What it really matters is your ill mother.
-Creon Meg's face fell down, As if her summer break's ruined by a single letter sent by her father. "And its Fathers day too..." She cried. As Hercules was done unpacking stuff, He luckily passed to the bedroom and heard Meg's cry. "What's wrong?" He asked, trying to make Meg feel better. "Oh...nothing..." She mumbled. Left Hercules and went to the balcony to think over and over about going to her parents. "Don't I have any siblings or relatives to handle this?, I'm not yet ready to face them, I'm still upset. They cant just apologize, why do we need the law if we can just apologize?!" Meg sucked a lot of air in anger. "Oh well, I haven't even seen them for a thousands of years. Maybe this is the good time that I can visit them. Meg wondered stupidly for a moment, " Oh wait... I don't know where they even live!" She took the letter with her and sailed off, bringing nothing but herself.She took the shortcut to the city but in the end of her intelligence she got lost. "... Okay, I know its this way" Points to her left. " No..No..." She got Ill-tempered and felt small.Then suddenly a horse gallop sound was coming towards her. She watched from her distance who was coming at her path. Then a boy same as her age stopped by. "Hi, a-are you lost, miss? Where are you headed?" said the calm boy. " yes, where's the City?" Meg asked in a hesitant manner. "I came from the Thebian quarters, maybe I could direct you from there?" He smiled seductively towards her. She didn't trust the man but its her only way to go out of the forest. The man took her hand and guided her while she was climbing up the carriage. Then the man rode back to Thebes. "May I ask the young lady's name?" he smiled. But meg doesn't want to answer she stayed quiet and lady like. If Herc saw my face, Im sure he'll burst out. I'm not like this at home, I usually crotch whenever I sit on the couch She imagined it over and over and twittered. "My lady, the sun's about to go, Hold on tight, I'm gonna speed it up" the man exclaimed. When they arrived at the gates, the man took a left turn far from the gates, and Meg was taking a snooze, the guards didn't notice them. He focused his eyes over to Meg's body, carefully grabbing her arms and pulling her towards. "Wha-What do you want?! Hey, back off you horrid animal!" She moved quickly and kicked him on his middle. She managed to escape but the man wont stop chasing her. She caught one of the law's attention and shot the man.They explained to her that this is a famous criminal that was being hunted for months. She passed by as a reward for helping them catch the criminal, normally thebian guards do not let anyone cross beyond the gates. They need to show a ticket or a pass to go in. She saw what the law has recovered. Urns, bones and Lydian coins inside the carriage. She figured why It was so smelly inside the carriage, there we're dead people in there. But nothing scares her except meeting her parents face to face.She cant turn back now, what must be started she must end it. "wait miss!" One of the law exclaimed. let me escort you around the city. - to be continued
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Post by toughgirl on Jun 21, 2009 16:58:32 GMT -5
AWESOME!
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Jun 23, 2009 18:36:58 GMT -5
continuation-
Two guards went with her while she was window shopping at one of the stores. They got cranky waiting for her to go to where she was suppose to go "hold up ma'am, we're suppose to be in our stand right now, what are you doing here anyway?" the man with the law asked.
"I am megara, hi and 'excuse me?! ma'am?" meg's voice cracked and stopped from that phrase. " We cant let you pass off from our eyes, where are you going?" the man croaked in steam. "Do you know any Creon in this place?" Meg asked angelically.
"We only know 2 Creons here, the other one died..." one of them answered her question with an asunder feeling.
"and the other? Does she have a wife?" Meg desperately needs the answer right now, she couldn't bear the shame she was in the crowd, looking at her every move, just there starring at the hideous sight of an outsider they never knew before.
" Yes, I think so..." then all fell quiet. when they heard a the news that a monster was on the way to put an enormous commotion in the city. "we must hurry!!!" the officer exclaimed. "Creon, take her to the Seville streets, you know the way right?" he ensured the secure to the other law.
meg whispered to herself"Creon?" then repeated the name over and over again. "CREON!!!" and accidentally burst the name loudly. Creon looked at her in a furrowed face." yes?" "Father, its me?" Meg's face wasn't sure if she would smile for him or make with the angry face. Creon shuddered. " And who are you to disrespect the law of this famous city?" he declared. " The law of the wretch and falling because of a famous dethroned coin headed king..." she sighed after a sentence so unbearable to hear. " Hey.. Anyone who apposes to the king means treachery!!!!" Creon then answered away. He gripped his hold and squeezed her wrist giving pain on Meg's arm, then Meg cried"AH! DA...!!! STOP!" Creon upon hearing those cries He finally remembered. When he was still ruling this city, he then remembered that cry when one of the officials under his ruling punishes her daughters. "Meg!?!?!!" He held her tight and gave her a huge embrace. "Dad, I cant breathe! kinda tight here!"Meg gasped loosing a lot of air. "Oh sorry" Creon chuckled." Hey little chip, How was life as an adult?" Creon expanded his smile. " Worse" She answered back crouching. Remembering the monster they run off somewhere safer for them to talk.
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Post by toughgirl on Jun 23, 2009 19:18:23 GMT -5
ONCE AGAIN AWESOME!
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Jul 10, 2009 10:51:12 GMT -5
Creon took her in his home. A 3 floored house made from combined blocks of stone.Meg opened her eyes wider as if she saw a bigger gold than the one Hercules and Zeus showed her for her birthday. She moved to the wall where all the family paintings we're hanging. A vase with her picture on it was standing on the left portion of the wall. And the relatives we're at the right. The only vase with her face on it. And the rest was someone else.
then her father started talking. "That was the time when we lost you from a terrible fire, I trembled that day and gone whack, I didn't ate for days, too busy looking for you among the ashes that the fire left."
Meg looked back at the vase with a troubled eyes and a furrowed eyebrows, biting her lower lip, meg held the vase and touched the picture. But It didn't help her much but to cry and be hugged by Creon. "How old was I back then?" She asked in a trembling voice of horror. Creon smiled and wiped off her tears. " you we're eleven years old." Meg cant help but show him a smile.
then she hugged him back " I miss you" After the sad conversation.Boom...Boom...Boom... all same sounds went down the stairs as a little boy slides from stair to stair.
Creon ran over the stair case and picked the boy up Meg couldnt help but check if the boy was doing alright.
Meg exclaimed while her eyes was focused on the boy "Oh my gods, is he alright?!" She tried to make it sound as panicking as possible. Creon picked the boy up"No scratches, It will be fine." he smiled "It?" "this is actually my invention." Creon smiled "A wooden human, After i was dethroned from the palace. I started making money with my inventions."Creon explained while shutting off the wooden puppet. "How...i mean... how did you..." Meg couldn't find the right word to complete her sentence. Her dad then interrupted the sentences "It was all in the Head" Creon pointed.
They had fun together, A father and daughter bonding. And after the night was young Meg was introduced to her old friends. Tina, Helena, Cassandra and some more. She was out with them for a while. Creon stayed in the house and waited for many hours. While with her friends she fell into a sudden striking pain from her body. She Winced and glanced at Helena who was sitting beside her, Then Meg's head fell from the table some glasses fell. Helena first noticed that Meg's skin color wasn't a fair white, She was turning a little whiter.
Helena then placed her hands eagerly on Meg's shoulders shaking her to wake up.
" Meg?..MEG!!" Helena quickly scanned her bag for fans that can keep Meg from the heat. "Meg!!! can you hear me?Wake up!!!" Cassandra called for the waiters, Tina stayed with Helena. They we're all panicking,Meg wouldn't open her eyes. After a while the waiters opened the windows started flipping their menus to give Meg some wind.In Her dreams she was lost in a thick black smoke hearing some old woman's voice. Meg then followed the voice
--to be continued--
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Post by toughgirl on Jul 11, 2009 10:14:09 GMT -5
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! omg omg MEG R U OKAY?!
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Post by gliriel on Jul 24, 2009 4:12:53 GMT -5
OMG keep writing PLEASE?
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Jul 31, 2009 4:34:01 GMT -5
who are you?Meg can only hear nothing but the sound of her voice echoing from her distance, The woman didnt reply, she couldnt help but chuckle at Meg's innocence of being potentially brave seeing a "thing". then she followed it with a slow but brief reply but her voice trailed in Meg's mind that somehow she know her. From her past. You we're so little back then The woman continued. Meg started to shiver, she was alone with this woman, her mind's been drawing pictures of scary decomposed zombies. She might turn into woman anytime soon, Meg, readying her feet to run shouted at the woman's face. GODS!! HELL! who are you!!! Another attempt, the woman disappeared. She had a quick jolt and finally the fuzzy colors her eyes been giving her edged and she quickly saw a lot of people crowding her.
"pfft... Hangovers?" Cassandra cackled. "huh... N-no..." She stammered. " I... wow... how many cups did i drink?" She counted but couldnt make the number for it, Her head was still throbbing with a massive headache. " uh.. JUST twenty" Helena laughed. TWENTY?! Her mind kept counting but her vision started to blur the objects and she paused. "... are you kidding meh?...Imma not ... gownuh..." Her voice sounded so hoarse and rough, the tone was siding with up and down. "Yup, she's drunk..." They both looked at each other and laughed. "Hercules...Hercules..." "Who is Hercules?" Helena asked with an upright voice. "OH!! he's the hottest hero ever! but i heard he's going to be married next full moon...ugh!" Cassandra stammered and tilted the table.
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Jul 31, 2009 4:39:15 GMT -5
correction: he might turn into ONE
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Post by gliriel on Jul 31, 2009 5:34:45 GMT -5
It's great! Keep going!
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Aug 4, 2009 8:41:56 GMT -5
"hmmm..." Then Helena tilted her head over Meg's. "What now?..." Cassandra looked at Meg. "You carry her... " Helena pointed her finger to Cassandra pocking her bony chest. "No way... is she heavy?" Cassandra laughed. "No--" "Then you carry her" "Bu--" "I'll hold her feet you hold her arms.." "what about the---" "Think of something" Cassandra stammered again. "Eh..heh... im all out of brains just hair..." "well...?? Do you want me to break this Whisky on your head so you can get a proper idea?" She took the small bottle of whisky and held it infront of her. "No thank you..." She pulled her toga up and started carrying with her sleeves pushed back up to her scrawny shoulders. "Lets go..." "I'd be expecting a lighter meg than this" Still struggling her hold but as both hands continued to slip they started to pinch their hold onto her. "Eh... work out..." "She's drunk what do you expect." They heard a carriage going to their direction,Helena waved and waited if the carriage will response, but they took a left turn and didnt noticed them. "Great...WE WALK!!!" Cassandra pointed ahead making her voice sound so positive. "...hmmp... " Helena huffed and shuffled her sandals against the floor. Her feet making a loud Thud sound. "How many days will this last?" Cassandra's voice seemed sarcastic enough. "pshh! it wont last for ya... DAYS!" Helena emphasized words which made Cassandra eagerly laugh. "i was being sarcastic" "You know..i hate you guys... meg and you are being sarcastic.." Helena furrowed her eyebrows, her eyes focused on Cassandra.
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Aug 5, 2009 1:16:51 GMT -5
"P.S. you're just an idiot.." Cassandra laughed sarcastically. *** It was warm, the sun rose too high that day. The light spun on Meg's face as she felt the burning sensation, immediately stood up and close the window, Her hands still rubbing her messed up face, Her eyes is still red from that night's reunion party. Her body is still hanging from the hang over that until now she couldn't let go. "Ugh.. what happened?..." Meg tried to focus her eyes edging the colorful wobbly figures her vision could give. "Where am i..." As her vision had gotten clearer, She quickly found the bathroom (actually its near the bed). "Good morning sunshine.. I wish i could hear those words coming out from Herc's mouth..." She gasped remembering her dear beloved Herc. "Sh*t! i forgot about Hercules!!! probably worried... I was going to stay for a day... but its been 2 days.. argh! d**n hangovers..." "Calm down" Helena heard her scream and kick walls, She peeked at the bathroom door watching Meg. "Huh? Bu--" "Well your cove is far from Thebes you know... It'll probably take you forever to get there just walking with hangovers. " She smiled "You're correct! thats why im gonna go downstairs and whip up some herbal tea!" "But we have no downstairs..." Helena laughed. "Wait!??! im in your house?! i thought this was Creon's... OH GREAT! now ive two man shouting at my face... " Meg run her hands through her hair brushing out her anger. " Make that one... Creon knows your here, idiot." Cassandra came upon hearing them cursing. "Eh... I need whisky... err TEA" Cassandra grabbed Meg and pulled her by the arm. " You wont need whisky, meggy." "I was just kidding" "No you're not." "okay you caught me. "Wouldnt whisky make anything worst?" Helena asked. "Thats why im taking those bottles of whisky you brought home last night" Cassandra smiled.
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Aug 7, 2009 11:31:22 GMT -5
"I-I'll Help!... Oh and Some hot chunky guy's waitin' for you downstairs. He looks really REALLY worried... I want to help and give some advice Bu--" Meg cracked her voice. "It's none of your business, i know." "COME ON HELENA!!! we've hundred of bottles to recycle!" Cassandra voice echoed in Meg's head as her heart beats with it, It gave her more headache and a worse hang over. "Could it be Hercules?... HMMP! I SHALL SEE!" Found herself smiling out of no where. (grrr... sleep:D ...goodnight FOLKS!! )
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Post by gliriel on Aug 7, 2009 21:35:39 GMT -5
It's good!
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Post by chroniclesofsparta on Aug 8, 2009 0:42:25 GMT -5
I got third place because people commented me with one or three words:)))) and im so freakin happyXD )
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