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Post by toughgirl on Sept 27, 2009 7:49:45 GMT -5
I rolled off Pegasus as soon as he landed, and herc, being cocerned as always asked me if i was alright. "Yeah, just a little air sick, so what's this?" Hercules looked down at his feet glancing at me and Pegasus, finnally he said "Disney Land". My eyes widened and Pegasus let out a disapproving snort, he shrugged "Mickey demanded us to come...". I laughed, "Ooh, I was ordered to come here by a mouse!". "HEY! He was serious!" Herc exclaimed making eye contact with me. "All I know is Peg and I are not going" on that note I ran the other direction, Herc chased after me, I wasnt sure if he was trying to catch me or not. "HEY HERO! You gonna catch up soon?!" I yelled over my panting, after i said that, he picked up his pace "Yeah he's gonna catch me" I ran until I was stopped by two guards, "were do you think your going, Miss Megara?" "I'M GETTING OUTTA HERE!". Hercules smirked "Meg can't you avoid being arrested, for just two seconds?" I looked up at him "Boy, do i have stories to tell you, Wonderboy" The guard scowled at me, holding me in an upward lock. Hercules stared at me for a second then asked the guards "who are you?". "We, sir, are the Mousekateers" The first gaurd spat, then the second gaurd added, "we're going to be the ones, taking care of you filthy fictional characters". Hercules just cringed, "yes... well, I think I can take care of my wife here, comeon Meg" The soldier put me down and I scrambled to Herc's side. When we came through the gates I searched the houses. They were all so diffferent, Bambi had a meadow, The Aristocats had a large french mansion, and Snow white had a cottage. Hercules began explaing, "You see the houses are ordered by the year the movie came out, so we'll be right next to...." I finnished for him "Phobeus and Esmeralda." He looked at me "and Quasimodo?" I shrugged, "I think he has a bell tower in the center of Disney Land." Hercules teased me, "Oh, so you dont want to go?" I let out a small growl as we approached our house, it was a rather large villa, like the one we had in Greece. As soon as we approached it Phobeus and Esmeralda ran out to greet us, they opened they're front gate and ran torward us, with Djali and her son, Zepher trailing behind. "Hi, you must be Hercules and Meg, we've heard a lot about you." Esmeralda smiled. Phobeus continued, "I'm Phobeus and this is my wife Esmeralda." and Esmeralda added, "This is my son Zepher and my goat Djali." Pegasus shoved Djali with his hoove, making fun of the goat's size. Esmeralda laughed as Djali looked up at Pegasus angrily, "Easy girl, he's new here." "Girl? I
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Post by toughgirl on Sept 27, 2009 7:56:56 GMT -5
Thought Djali was....." Esmeralda cut me off "No, she's a girl, she has horns because if she didnt people would think she's a dog, right Jali?" Djali just scowled at Pegasus. Esmeralda, stood there ignoring the tension between Djali and Pegasus, "anyways, meet Zepher, he's my son." I looked down at him, "yes I saw the sequel. Sorry it didnt do well....". Zepher pouted, "It did fine..." Esmeralda nodded, "yes yes, of course it did. I have so much to show you Meg!". Esmeralda pulled me along, I wasnt sure what she was going to show me, all i knew was i was excited." (sorry its short, i just wanted to finnish the first part)
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Post by toughgirl on Oct 1, 2009 22:05:17 GMT -5
Chapter 2:
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Post by toughgirl on Oct 1, 2009 22:43:51 GMT -5
Esmeralda pulled me to the other side of disney land and stopped by a hall of doors. I dizzily stared at them not saying a word, Esmeralda quickly explained. "Okay, these doors lead to other worlds of animation." I looked at her wide eyed, "oh really?" She nodded "The blue door leads to future Disney movies." she paused and opened the door. She pulled me in, there were three houses one was a Chinese palace, another was some sort of tribal palace that I couldnt quite get, and the last looked like a large diner that was both old fashioned and futuristic. Esmeralda pointed to the diner first, "Thats were Sarah, Jim, Dilbert, Captain Amelia and her three children live. Captain Amelia is kind of cool but incredibly bossy, she still thinks she's the captain." I nodded acting like I understood. She pointed to the tribal-like palace, "Thats were Kida and Milo live, its rather fancy, and not quite my taste but its okay."
Esmeralda smiled dramatically pausing, "and the Chinese palace is Where Mulan, Shang, and her kin live, I taught her every battle move she has ever learned, but Shang pretends like HE did." Esmeralda continued, "You can visit THIS door whenever you want. We have to keep moving though!" The next door was blood read and I shivered just looking at it, Esmeralda swallowed and told me in a stern voice, "Meg you cant EVER enter this door." I laughed "why not?" I reached for the handle, but Esmer quickly blocked off the door, "this is where all the disney villians go, all the ones you thought were dead are in there roaming around in the streets, fighting eachother, joining gangs and doing cruel things to others, the weakest villian is their prey." she said her voice quivering. I looked to the door suddenly affraid of it, I'm afraid of a piece of wood...she continued sighing, "Theres this deer in Bambi II, Ronno, he was sent there quite a while ago, even though his movie is suppose to come out 2006, he was sent there, that poor deer hased been bruised and beaten since the day he got here." I tilted my head like a confused puppy, "then why is he in there if he's so helpless?" Esmeralda answered "He was depicted as the villian, but he wasnt really tough, just thingyy and he's just a kid.." Esmeralda just shook her head and moved on to the next door, "this door leads to other types of animation like Pixar, anime, etc etc etc!" She glanced once more at the red door and walked quickly away from it, "W-we should really get out of here Meg." I smiled evilly, I thought to myself "I need to check this world out, after all, I'm pretty evil..."
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Post by gliriel on Oct 3, 2009 5:38:55 GMT -5
Oh wow, this is awesome! What a good idea!
Very creative!
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Post by toughgirl on Oct 3, 2009 9:39:34 GMT -5
thanks, and the good thing bout this fanfic is that it could be more of an ongoing series....man there are A LOT of typos
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Post by toughgirl on Oct 4, 2009 21:56:24 GMT -5
Esmeralda looked down at the road as she walked along, Meg looked around at all the other characters. Some waved at her, some barked...it was really weird. She finnally reached the villa. Esmeralda, sauntered over to her cottage without saying a word. I quickened my pace with every step, eventually I was running, I ran until I slammed the door of the villa. Panting I looked around for I husband. I finnally found him in the kitchen with Lady and Tramp. I laughed, then I stopped when the two glared at me. Hercules smiled at me and Lady barked "Hello, how are you." Tramp stared down at the thingyer spaniel. I nodded to Lady and looked to Hercules, "did you invite any other animals, I-I mean neibors!
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Post by toughgirl on Oct 6, 2009 1:44:31 GMT -5
At that moment a ball of yarn rolled across the room and trailing behind it was Marie, Berlioz, Tolouse, Scamp, Angel, and his sisters. I glared at hercules and he stammered, "well, invite isnt exactly the word for it....more like they planned a party for tonight before we got here." Lady looked up at me, "Please excuse us." I ran across the house into the living room and shoot. There was all of Disney land sitting in my living room....great. As soon as they saw me they bombarded me with questions. Duchess meowed, "How'd you survive with Hades?" Aroura giggled, "How much do you weigh?", question after question MEG! MEG! MEG! They wouldnt shut up! I wanted to punch Cinderella in the face for asking me if I had any kinda "relationship" with Hades. Hercules came into the room and then Ariel spoke up, "So when are you two going to have, I dont know, uh...kids?" I almost choked, but all I did was blush and glance at Herc who had the same astonished look as I did. Simba laughed from the crowd, "Meg cant have KIDS!" I leaned forward in curiousity, "uh....why not?" Nala quickly shut him up, "what he means is, uh,....." Jasmine cut the lion off, "Its not your thing, being a mother and all, plus your too skinny." All of their eyes were staring at my stomach and agreeing with Jasmine, no wait Marie isn't----oh, yes she is too. I slowly backed out of the room and ran to Esmeralda's.
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Post by gliriel on Oct 6, 2009 18:17:07 GMT -5
It's great so far!
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Post by toughgirl on Oct 9, 2009 22:46:21 GMT -5
thanx
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